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Kevin Potter, this is an impressive piece of comparative textual work. The way you move between the Masoretic Text, Theodotion, and the Old Greek doesn’t just “explain differences” it makes each tradition feel like a distinct theological lens with its own emotional weight. The first-person Nebuchadnezzar sections in the OG especially stand out; they turn what is usually a distant narrative into something psychologically vivid and unsettling in a powerful way.

One thing I’d gently flag as a reader and editor is that the density of citation + commentary sometimes overwhelms the narrative flow. There are moments where the argument pauses for so many layered comparisons that the reader can lose the emotional thread of the story (especially in the madness section). Tightening a few of the explanatory bridges between traditions could make the impact even sharper without losing any scholarly depth.

That said, the ideas here clearly deserve careful editorial shaping, not simplification. If you’re open to it, I’d genuinely love to work with you as a beta reader helping refine clarity, pacing, and readability while preserving the depth of your analysis. I think this kind of work could reach a much wider audience with the right editorial sharpening.

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